For the first draft I think it was good overall but, clearly needs more work on it and more shots need to be taken, this means we will have to have another day of filming. There are problems with doing that though. Our main actor (Amber) dyed her hair dark brown, this means we can't use any old footage, this means we will be short on time when it comes to filming.
Since this was our first draft, Jacob, our editor, didn't do any special effects, so we can quickly find faults and mistakes made in the first draft in terms of acting, camera work, the length of each shot, etc..
Music
When it comes to music, i think it was way too dramatic from the start. The scene is set in the middle of the desert, and shit should be reflected in the music by having really simple or music with a small number of instruments unlike the one used in the draft. This will give a sense of loneliness to the viewer and this will really emphasise how stranded the character is.
Camera Work
When is comes to camera work, it can be broken down into a few aspects:-
- Camera Placement
- Camera stability
Shots
Some shots used are pointless and looses the viewers interest and not only that most of our shots were hand held, and were very shaky even after we stabilised it in post.
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